BREAKUP ON THE BAYOU

by Vincent VanAllen





JULY 2007 #3
   

 

He hurled the fish into the buckbrush and sat down in the mud beside the tackle box. Pulling the last treble hook from the box, he rigged up another chicken liver bait and launched it into the bayou.
Lindy Beth sidled up next to him. She held out a clean, red handkerchief. “Here, let me doctor it for you.”
Gator turned his hand over and let her inspect it. His palm had turned a dark pink. It was swelling.
Lindy Beth opened the tackle box and pulled out a pint of whiskey stashed in the bottom. After cleansing the wound with whiskey, she tied the damp handkerchief around his hand.
The two of them sat on the blanket and watched the poles. Neither spoke until Gator brought the whiskey bottle to his lips and tipped it back. “Pain killer,” he said, winking at Lindy Beth.
She cozied up next to him, stroked his arm, told him she was sorry. They kissed with a lot of tongue. He slipped his hand under her sundress and fondled her. When he tried to push her down onto her back, she resisted.
“Gator, stop it.” She blushed. “Just a few more weeks, that’s all.” She placed his hand on her ripening belly. He shrugged and pulled his hand away.
She leaned back on an elbow and played with a dry strand of her hair. “Remember when you used to say I was sweeter than bees’ honey? Remember how you’d say, ‘L.B., you’re so sweet ya gimme a toothache’?”
Gator scratched the stubble on his chin. God, he was tired of her nonsense. Sometimes her whining put a poison-ivy rash all over him.
“Gator, why don’t you say them things anymore?”
He took another swill of whiskey, stared out over the bayou. The sweet, warm taste of sour mash rushed down his throat and coated his stomach before his blood pumped it right back into his face. An amber flash of light glinted off the bottle when he tipped it toward the sun. He grinned. “Darlin’, you know you’re all sugar plums dancin’ round in my head.”
Lindy Beth kissed him on the cheek. She rolled onto her side and flipped through the worn pages of her romance book. Then she gasped and sat up abruptly. “Gator, look!” She pointed to the hill behind them.
Gator turned and gazed at the charred remains of his old house. The debris lay a good fifty yards up the sloped bank, half hidden behind leafy sweet gum and hickory trees. He’d wondered how long it would take Lindy Beth to notice it. Over the years, the red brickwork had weathered down to a scaly pink, and most of it was caked with black soot left over from the fire. In the center of the place, charcoaled timbers lay scattered like black pick-up sticks. When the wind blew just right, fine ash floated down the hillside and slammed into the boggy musk of the bayou, blending into an acrid funk that made his nose twitch. The bricks were the only thing left standing, and the fire had even dimpled them in spots. The insurance man had called the dimples spalling.


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