BREAKUP ON THE BAYOU

by Vincent VanAllen





JULY 2007 #3
   

 

Gator pulled the handle out of the mud and pointed the rod tip down.
“Hey! That’s my rod!” Lindy Beth frowned and tossed her book aside.
Gator grinned at her. “Bad luck to lose the first fish---” he whipped the rod back and set the hook, “---of the day.”
The taut line ripped through the black water, and the reel squealed as more line spooled out. Damn! He’d forgotten to set the reel drag since he’d gone bream fishing last week. The much-larger channel cats put up more of a fight and could really make the reel sing if the drag wasn’t set tight enough. He cranked the drag down using the pronged metal disc on the side of the reel. The catfish broke the water surface with a splash. On its second big run, the fish streaked down and to the right. Gator tipped the rod toward the fish, but it was too late. The line snapped.
“Son of a bitch!” He threw the rod down and stomped over to the tackle box. Lindy Beth covered her mouth with a hand while she laughed.
The tackle box was pretty bare. There were plenty of lead slip sinkers, but only two treble hooks remained. Lindy Beth had forgotten to buy hooks at the bait shop, natch. She had spent the money he’d given her on a candy bar instead. Grabbing a hook and sinker, Gator rigged the rod with another chicken liver, then cast the bait into the same spot where the fish had bitten. Before reinserting the pole handle into the mud, he loosened the drag a tiny bit.
He looked at the smug grin on Lindy Beth’s face. That was the whole problem with her: no respect. He glanced at his wristwatch. Every minute brought them seconds closer to inevitable breakup. And each time L.B. opened her fat mouth, it only helped him to know he was doing the right thing.
“Gator, why you keep looking at your watch all the time? You act like you’re late for an appointment or something.”
He laughed. “Yeah, me and the next fish got a date with destiny.” He adjusted the reel drag on his own pole.
By the time he finished his first beer, Gator’s rod had a bite. He eased the pole handle out of the mud hole and dropped the rod tip down to create a little slack in the line. The fish hammered the bait, and Gator jerked the rod back hard, hoping to rip the lips right off the fish. He’d actually done that once while bass fishing on the Atchafalaya River years ago.
This time the drag was set just right. Gator played the fish fair, let the cat run deep into the pool, reeled in a bit, then let it run again. No sense in trying to horse a channel cat out of the water; they tire out pretty fast anyway. When the fish made it to shore, it lay on its side, gasping.
He reached down and grabbed the catfish by the lower lip. Its mouth closed over his thumb, and its tiny teeth grated his flesh, causing him to relax his grip. “Bitch,” he said to the fish, thumping it on the nose.



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